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Kia Ora Caitlin! My name is Jessie-lee from Ahipara school. I really liked your 'seeking help poster'. I thought all the tips were really good. Though for your second tip, you repeated yourself a bit. You said "Ignore them and move on to more positive comments and ignore the negative ones". It also doesn't make much sense. Maybe next time, just say "Negative comments are not very good, so move on to the nicer comments and enjoy what they have said to you". Or something like that.
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something done well Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
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Kia Ora Caitlin
ReplyDeleteI really liked the way you were able to create this poster and post it on your blog.
Ka pai to mahi!
Mā te wā
Mrs Torrie
Hey Caitlin, I'm Ariana from Ahipara School.
ReplyDeleteI really like the layout of your poster. It's very enlightening and your vocab is technical and complex.
What did you use to make your poster?
Kia Ora Caitlin! My name is Jessie-lee from Ahipara school. I really liked your 'seeking help poster'. I thought all the tips were really good. Though for your second tip, you repeated yourself a bit. You said "Ignore them and move on to more positive comments and ignore the negative ones". It also doesn't make much sense. Maybe next time, just say "Negative comments are not very good, so move on to the nicer comments and enjoy what they have said to you". Or something like that.
ReplyDeleteBye Caitlin!